![]() ![]() The Lensky Connection by Conrad Delacroix Eve’s fine focus on pace and tension – and the hidden pillars that create it – really helped, and gave me a roadmap to nail all these down for my final draft. Eve came back quickly with some incisive input into what needed to be improved, areas where the story might be flagging and needed tightening up, or areas where the plotting needed some fine tuning. ![]() I was pretty confident of the general direction of the story, but I knew there were some weak areas, and I asked Eve to focus especially on those: to ensure that I was hitting all my mystery and thriller plot points. Second Lieutenant Tennyson "Ted" Drake, until recently a barracks schoolmaster, is on a shadowy reconnaissance trip deep in the Ardennes forest.īut when the German panzers burst across the border, Drake's commanding officer is killed, leaving Drake in a place he should not be, with no orders, just a bloodstained notebook filled with code - and a mysterious sketch of a raven.Īs the Allied defences crumble before the onslaught of the Blitzkrieg, Drake must stay alive long enough to discover the raven’s secret - and stop its catastrophic consequences on the outcome of the war… Eve was great to have on board for an editorial review of my manuscript before I started my final draft. The Allies are at a standoff with Hitler's Germany. ![]()
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